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We’ll focus specifically on the signaled point of view shift since this is the point of view shift that confuses the most people and which is the most challenging to pull off.We’ll also discuss head hops and what differentiates a head hop from a signaled point of view shift so that participants will never be confused about that again.Some other accomplishments: Finding ways to write your story from beginning to end isn’t easy for new writers as well as seasoned authors.In this creative workshop, we will use different writing prompts, music, pictures, and methods to motivate and add inspiration to your writing. Pellegrino, breeder of German Shepherds and networker of fun, writes mystery and suspense.This is particularly true when it comes to showing vs.telling when it comes to emotions, thoughts and knowledge that the character has.And you’ll get the expert advice of Alicia on how to edit in the energy into your prose.Here’s your chance to figure out what is dead and drowsy in your voice, and how to wake it up!
With the guidance of Alicia Rasley, a veteran editor and writing teacher, you will learn to identify passive prose—both boring passages and grammatical passive voice (“The ball was hit”)—and revise in more action.Most important, an individual voice will set you apart from everyone else, and make your books or series attract repeat readers.They’ll come back for the dramatic experience your words and sentences and paragraphs create.Until July 2014 Laurie Sanders was the founder, CEO, and editor-in-chief at Black Velvet Seductions.
In 2014, after almost 10 years as CEO and editor-in-chief, Laurie was ready to take a step back to enjoy some time with family and to engage in her other long neglected hobbies.
With examples and interactive exercises, you’ll learn to recognize when passive voice is useful, and when it should be replaced with more active sentence constructions.